Today i commented on Chris blog post about Odysseus the Great Warrior he talked about what he was like in his video and in his blurb and he also had a partner to make the video with his name is Andrew.
I wrote a comment with a greeting like hi hello and a compliment such as I really like your work, your blog post looks really interesting. We also had to make a connections with the authors blog post like I have learnt and done this kind of work before, this blurb has taught me a lot about what you have been learning.
We also had to write a helpful comment such as I think that you should write in paragraphs, I think that you should give a more descriptive blurb. That will also help the reader to understand the blog post and at the end we could write an encouraging sentence that will encourage the author to write more blog posts.
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