Writing

LI: To revise and edit a recount.

Today at writing we had to get a partner and we had to write a recount and we had to mark it each others and this is my partners marking because they are highlighted words that he has added and the recount on top is the recount that I made and wrote. And I was in a group of three and we all had to cheek our partners work and we had to give them pints to see who changed there recount properly and we also had to see who had the most points.

Line Tag

LI: Recap on structure and language features of written texts.

This week for writing we had to make a google Doc. Then we had 40 minutes to write about the game we played after lunch on Tuesday we had to wrte something about line tag and using some of the 5 Ws. Then Mr Ogilvie told us that we have 40 minutes on Writing again. We had to make our second writing better that our first writing

Text Types

LI: to recap structure and language that we have written before.

today for writing we learnt how to find different writing structures in procedures, explanation, and recounts we had to find different writing structures and we also had to write what that word means with a reason and we also had to point out where those structures are in the story.