Commenting

Today I commented on Shinaye blog post. her post was about the book she read and she had to do a setting description.

 

Commenting

Today i commented on Angelica's blog post her post was about a book she read called the lion song and she had a DLO about her fiction follow ups.

Commenting

I commented on Angelica's blog post it was about the Archimedes screw and hot it is used to push water up hill in her blog post she had a definition for the word and had some questions she answered with her group. 

Commenting

I commented on Angelica's blog post it was about the Archimedes screw and hot it is used to push water up hill in her blog post she had a definition for the word and had some questions she answered with her group. 

Commenting

Today I Commented on Angelica's Blog post about what questions in her blurb she said that she answered what questions and made some herself for others to answer.

Commenting

I commented on Angelica's blog post about what is a fraction is in her blurb she told us what fractions she was going to tell us about.

Commenting

LI: To Comment on someones blog post and give them Feed Back.

Today I commented on Liletina's blog post it was about how she was building longer sentences and i gave her feed back of what she should do better in her Blurb.  

Commenting

LI: To Comment on someones blog post and give them Feed Back.

Today I commented on Liletina's blog post it was about how she was building longer sentences and i gave her feed back of what she should do better in her Blurb.  

Commenting

LI: To Comment on someones blog post and give them Feed Back.

Today I commented on Liletina's blog post it was about how she was building longer sentences and i gave her feed back of what she should do better in her Blurb.  

Commenting

LI: To Comment on someones blog post and give them Feed Back.

Today I commented on Liletina's blog post it was about how she was building longer sentences and i gave her feed back of what she should do better in her Blurb.  

Cybersmart/Commenting

LI: To write a SMART blog comment.

Today for Cyber-Smart we were learning about how to write smart blog comments. to write a good blog comment you should have a greeting and next you should say something about there blog post that they can to better and next you should have a question like how did they learn what they are learning about and then give them some encouragement like good job, keep op the great work.

Commenting

LI: To Comment on someones blog post and give them Feed Back.

Today I commented on Liletina's blog post it was about how she was building longer sentences and i gave her feed back of what she should do better in her Blurb.  

Commenting

LI: To Comment on someones blog post and give them Feed Back.

Today I commented on Liletina's blog post it was about how she was building longer sentences and i gave her feed back of what she should do better in her Blurb.  

Commenting

LI: to give good fed back of what this person should fix or do better.

Today I Commented on Sione T blog post and his blog post was about when he collected data from diferent people around that school and then once he gathered the data he said that he had cleaned it.

Commenting

Today for Commenting I commented on Motes blog post about the game Ki o Rahi is blog post was very interesting and he also had a DLO image of what the field looked like and he had a little bit of information about how to play the game.

Commenting

LI: to write a quality comment.


Today for Cyber-Smart we learnt how to write a comment with a greeting like hi hello and a compliment such as I really like your work, your blog post looks really interesting. We also had to make a connections with the authors blog post like I have learnt and done this kind of work before, this blurb has taught me a lot about what you have been learning.


We also had to write a helpful comment such as I think that  you should write in paragraphs, I think that you should give a more descriptive blurb. That will also help the reader to understand the blog post and at the end we could write an encouraging sentence that will encourage the author to write more blog post

Reading

This week for reading we did blog post comments. First we had to make a google docs after I made a google docs I went on Fanini blog post and I comment him and the commenting had be quality and In you comments had be Greetings, How they learnt, What they did well and what they supposed to do well after I comment on Fanini blog post I had to blog my work and then put in the LS1 must do.

Commenting

LI: to write a quality comment.


Today for Cyber-Smart we learnt how to write a comment with a greeting like hi hello and a compliment such as I really like your work, your blog post looks really interesting. We also had to make a connections with the authors blog post like I have learnt and done this kind of work before, this blurb has taught me a lot about what you have been learning.


We also had to write a helpful comment such as I think that  you should write in paragraphs, I think that you should give a more descriptive blurb. That will also help the reader to understand the blog post and at the end we could write an encouraging sentence that will encourage the author to write more blog post

Commenting

LI: to write a quality comment.


Today for Cyber-Smart we learnt how to write a comment with a greeting like hi hello and a compliment such as I really like your work, your blog post looks really interesting. We also had to make a connections with the authors blog post like I have learnt and done this kind of work before, this blurb has taught me a lot about what you have been learning.


We also had to write a helpful comment such as I think that  you should write in paragraphs, I think that you should give a more descriptive blurb. That will also help the reader to understand the blog post and at the end we could write an encouraging sentence that will encourage the author to write more blog posts.

Film Festival Commenting

LI: to write a quality comment.


Today we had to write a comment with a greeting like hi hello and a compliment such as I really like your work, your blog post looks really interesting. We also had to make a connections with the authors blog post like I have learnt and done this kind of work before, this blurb has taught me a lot about what you have been learning.


We also had to write a helpful comment such as I think that  you should write in paragraphs, I think that you should give a more descriptive blurb. That will also help the reader to understand the blog post and at the end we could write an encouraging sentence that will encourage the author to write more blog posts