LI: To write an explanation using TEEL paragraphs.
This week we have been revising explanation writing. Next week is our assessment week so we did this collaborative challenge to remind ourselves what is needed when we write explanations the structure that we are using to write an explanation is TEEl. T stands for topic sentence to hook the reader in make them interested, E stands for elaborate or provide more information about the topic sentence E stands for evidence give some evidence about the topic to strengthen the paragraph. For this task we worked collaboratively together to create an explanation about why is it important to use the CARE values. Our CARE values at Panmure bridge school are Confident, Attitude, Respect, and Excellence and Innovations. We then created a voice recording of our whole group reading our paragraphs aloud.
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ReplyDeleteHi Juel.
ReplyDeleteI really liked you explanation about the PBS care values, the voice recording was really clear and you gave great examples of why we should follow the care values. I also like how you explained the meaning of TEEL. Maybe you can explain transnational vocabulary and how you used it. What is transitional vocabulary?
Good work
Hello, Vayan
DeleteThank you for your feedback I really appreciate it. This helps me a lot and give me a better understanding of what to change or add. Transitional vocabulary are words that are powerful than using common or informal language.