Writing

LI: To revise and edit a recount.

Today at writing we had to get a partner and we had to write a recount and we had to mark it each others and this is my partners marking because they are highlighted words that he has added and the recount on top is the recount that I made and wrote. And I was in a group of three and we all had to cheek our partners work and we had to give them pints to see who changed there recount properly and we also had to see who had the most points.